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I give it a 9 to break the chain of 8's~

I'm normally not a hiphop person at all. Really. You give me some techno/dance and I'll rock your world.
But this stuff is real man. The lyrics are good, and the beat and instruments go with what you're trying to say.
I do have to criticize the voice recording... It's a bit too clear. perhaps you could change the voice recording to a .wav file, and important into your synth or mixing software and add reverb or something? It just seems a bit flat that's all. Your song is very smooth, some reverb and the vocal's should be right along with it.
Intro is to die for~ You really spoke with the tone and beat as well as your lyrics.

Emdee-NF responds:

thanks man, yeah this song is probably one of my favs. although i do wish i coulda made the vocals better. Take care!

Just.... Yes

Everything is just put together so well. I can't believe what I'm listening to. Phenomenal.

SUB4RU responds:

Thanks buddy!

Silent anguish

I heard the first 10 seconds of this, and then downloaded it.
I hope you understand what you've done here, with such an emotional and sad song... I hope you understand how neglected the rest of my playlist will feel.

broove responds:

Glad you liked it. Enjoy ;)

Yes

I absolutely love the side-chaining on the bass sound for the intro. At least, I think it's side-chaining... xD. 1:41, epik melody. This is very.. mystical sounding. Very, very unique. I haven't ever heard anything quite like it before... I like it =).

xD I love it.

Contrary to Painruler, I love cute beats. My only issue is that it's too quiet. Perhaps the transition from what you started with to about... 1/3rd into the song is.. too contrasting for my taste. But it sounds very pretty, and I love the padding. I think it'd be sooo epik if you put a bass bomb in 2:19 xD. If you made this on FL then I would love to mess around with a little xD. I love the outro with the piano fading in. It's very nice =).

Sounds like a lot of effort was put into this song. I enjoyed it =)

momboom1 responds:

Thanks mate :). Yeah the volume problem is quite annoying but i just pump up my speakas and let it roll. If you want the .flp ill send it to you over email. PM me about it if you want it :).

... Very, very nice.

I love it. I absolutely love it. I dont know what it is about it, but it's amazing, whatever it is xD. The melody is so... good. Your choice of instruments is also good =). Perhaps i would prefer my piano in the intro and middle to be less.... hard, I suppose, but that's just a personal preference. I love it.

Redeemer2113 responds:

thanks man, glad you enjoyed it :D be sure to check out the rest of my songs :)

Peace,
2113

Very chill...

I guess that's why it's called "A day in the life." It's nice. It gives off a feeling of sadness, perhaps forlorn? It's very nice. The low bass sounds are... comforting. Mystical sounding =). I love how the occasional e-piano sounds are imbedded throughout the song, it gives it a very nice.. flavor.

I love it.

I love how the song starts and slowly adds and builds. I feel it takes a bit too long tho. Perhaps it's just me. The melody is catchy tho =). And yes, it is a bit repetitive... The beginning of the second half (around 1:50) sounds a bit empty as well... I like it better when you come in with the lead about 3/4ths of the way through.

BUT, that's enough of me being a critic. Overall, it's good, and I love the ending fade. The intro is so epic.

NghtcrwlrD responds:

Haha thanks! :D

Very cool

I love the vocals. The melody and your dance lead are pretty good as well. But, while I'm writing this review (and very much enjoying your song), it decided to end at 1:06. Thoroughly annoying =.=. Something so awesome should be finished =). I'll dl it if you do.

I say, build up what you have at the end of the song and add one or two more upper register sounds and some mid/lower sounds as well for complexity, then transition into a softer phase, perhaps with just padding. After that, bring back that blow bottle sound you had in the intro, but mix it with the dance lead you have for the second half, add a few bass bombs, and you're golden.

ioneofmany responds:

Hey thanks Bob! Sorry that its so short and it bothers you. :X Great suggestions that I'll take into consideration. This goes for everyone else as well. This semester is winding down and I hopefully will have some free time coming up soon. I read all of my reviews so it means a lot to me.

-- Chris

Ahhhhhhhhh. What epikness.

xDDD The lyrics are genius. The instruments and pads are put together pretty well, and the melody is sooo addicting and awesome ><

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